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I live in Peshawar which is the capital of Khyber Pakhtunkhwa and It's also province of Pakistan. It ancient city of Pakistan . Around one million people's live in my city however our city is famous for food . Furthermore Peshawar sadar is the hustle bustle area where people's walk and doing shopping .some historical buildings are still look like in same condition as opposed to hundreds years ago . I love my city ☺ plz evaluate my mistake
2020년 11월 7일 오후 4:22
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I live in Peshawar. Which is the capital of Khyber Pakhtunkhwa and It's also a province of Pakistan. It is an ancient city of Pakistan . Around one million people's live in my city.However, our city is famous for food . Furthermore, Peshawar sadar is the hustle bustle area, where people's walks and doing shopping .Some historical buildings are still looks like the same conditions as opposed to hundreds years ago . I love my city ☺ plz evaluate my mistake.
2020년 11월 10일
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