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Ellie
Q: What kinds of TV programme do you often watch?
I often watch TV series and sports on TV. when I watch TV series, I usually watch them with my mom otherwise personally I prefer to watch English TV series on my phone. These TV series are mostly about family, relationship and so on. I watch them just for fun and spending time with my mom together.
For sports, I prefer some big events like this Winter Olympics. These big sports events are often worldwide and very competitive which bring us a lot of excitement. What's more, I can talk about these big events with my friends later which is more interesting.
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2022년 2월 14일 오전 3:58
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Q: What kinds of TV programme do you often watch?
I often watch TV series and
sports on TV. I usually watch TV series with my mom, however I
personally prefer to watch English TV series on my phone. These TV series are
mostly about family, relationships etc. I usually watch them for the fun of it and so that I can spend some time with my mom/mother.
With regards to sports, I prefer watching some of the big events like the current Winter Olympics. These big sporting events are often worldwide and very
competitive, which brings us a lot of excitement. Furthermore, I can talk about
these big events with my friends at a later stage, which makes it more interesting.
You have written good sentences & they are understandable. I did however correct a few sentences for the sake of better writing, for even better comprehension.
2022년 2월 14일
Try again with the help of Charles ☺️
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2022년 2월 14일
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