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The mountain has shown its original appearance which was been terraced field after a big fire.
2026년 8월 5일 오후 11:50
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The mountain has revealed its original appearance, which consisted of terraced fields, after a major fire.
Level: B2/C1. Your sentence is understandable and communicates the idea clearly. The main difficulty was the verb structure "was been", as well as choosing the most natural expression for describing the mountain's original appearance. Good work! 😊
2026년 8월 8일 오전 10:16
The mountain has shown its original appearance which was been terraced filled after a big fire.
2026년 8월 8일 오후 10:14
The mountain showed its original appearance, which was a terraced field, after a big fire.
Cheers, Yoyo
2026년 8월 6일 오후 8:16
After the big fire, the mountain has revealed its original appearance, which was a terraced field.
2026년 8월 6일 오전 6:50
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