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Today I had classes from the third period to the fourth period. Both were English classes; the third period was a presentation, and the fourth period was a test. My test results were okay. After school, I have to go to the hospital. When I get home, I’ll work on the presentation for the fourth period tomorrow.
2026년 7월 14일 오전 6:17
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Today, I had classes from the third period to the fourth period. Both were English classes; the third period was a presentation, and the fourth period was a test. My test results were okay. After school, I have to go to the hospital. When I get home, I’ll work on the presentation for the fourth period tomorrow.
Level: C1.
Your writing is clear and well organised. The sequence of events is easy to follow, and your grammar is accurate. Only a small punctuation change was needed. Keep up the excellent work!🌸
2026년 7월 14일 오전 10:07
You explained your day really clearly! I’d just change a couple of phrases to make them sound more natural:
“Today, I had English classes during the third and fourth periods. I gave a presentation during the third period and had a test during the fourth.”
Also, “my presentation for tomorrow’s fourth-period class” sounds a little more natural 😊
2026년 7월 14일 오전 9:39
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