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I went to college this afternoon. I had an important presentation and a test, so I’m a little tired, but I did my best. I’m going to have dinner now and then work out, so today has been a really good day. I’ll be working my part-time job from morning until night tomorrow, so I think I’ll be tired—I plan to go to bed early tonight.
2026년 7월 14일 오전 9:16
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I went to college this afternoon. I had an important presentation and a test, so I’m a little tired, but I did my best. I’m going to have dinner now and then work out, so today has been a really good day. I’ll be working at my part-time job all day tomorrow, so I think I’ll be tired. I plan to go to bed early tonight.
Level: C1.
Your writing is fluent and natural. You used future forms correctly, and your ideas are clearly connected. The only improvement was making the work expression sound more natural. Keep up the excellent work! 🌸
2026년 7월 14일 오전 10:06
Great job! Just one small correction:
“I’ll be working at my part-time job all day tomorrow” sounds more natural than “I’ll be working my part-time job.” 😊
2026년 7월 14일 오전 9:36
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