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The work environment has become very toxic. During the pandemic, no one would like to enter China, but the previous principal was retired, the school needed to hire a new one. Finally, the school hired one, but her condition is: not only herself, but also her husband, her daughter in law and her son should work at our school together. All in high positions. Such as the head of one or two subjects, assistant head of primary or secondary. Many good teachers left because of they couldn’t see their families during the pandemic. The teachers’ qualify are becoming worse and worse. I recall many years ago, the teachers asked students to give us appreciation cards and gave us red packages during Chinese news year. But after the previous manager left, the custom has also gone. Some teachers even asked my colleague to pick up deliveries for them. My colleague refused, then she was fired.
2024년 8월 15일 오전 8:05
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The work environment has become very toxic. During the pandemic, no one would like to enter China. The previous principal retired and the school needed to hire a new one. Finally, the school hired one, but her condition was: not only she herself, but also her husband, her daughter-in-law and her son should work at our school together. All in high positions, such as the head of one or two subjects, assistant head of primary or secondary. Many good teachers left because they couldn't see their families during the pandemic. The teachers’ qualifications are becoming worse and worse. I recall that many years ago, the teachers asked students to give us appreciation cards and red packages during the Chinese New Year. But after the previous manager left, the custom has also disappeared. Some teachers even asked my colleague to pick up deliveries for them. My colleague refused, and then she was fired.
修改说明: “her condition is” 改为 “her condition was”,保持时态一致,讲述过去的情况。 “daughter-in-law”,正确的拼写,中间有连字符。 “because of” 后接名词或名词短语,“because” 后接句子,此处去掉 “of”。 “qualify” 改为 “qualifications”,“qualification” 表示 “资质、资格”,常用复数形式。 “Chinese news year” 改为 “Chinese New Year”,“春节” 的正确表达。 “gone” 强调 “不见了、消失了”,用 “disappeared” 更能准确表达 “习俗消失” 的意思。
2024년 8월 17일
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