One of the good examples of bad designs, in my eyes, are the inner plannig of some of the buses I took. In some buses the passages are too narrow so there is no place for people who move by wheelchair

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Idan Polishuk

One of the good examples of bad designs, in my eyes, are the inner plannig of some of the buses I took. In some buses the passages are too narrow so there is no place for people who move by wheelchair. Furthermore, the are various kind of buses that are not planned with enough seats.

2022년 1월 28일 오전 10:41

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One of the good examples of bad designs, in my view ( or in my opinion), is the inner design of some of the buses I have been in ( or I have ridden in). In some buses the aisles are too narrow so there is no place for people with wheelchairs. Furthermore, there are various buses that are not designed with enough seats.

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2022년 1월 28일