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Arinda
My favorite festival is “Sedekah Bumi”. So “Sedekah Bumi” is a traditional festival in Java especially for javanese, it celebrates every year. There are bunch of foods there, every person brings their foods that they had made and then we were sharing our foods with others. I used to bring a basket to have some foods when I was kid. I love this festival because it remains us especially for javanese to thank the earth. But for the past two years “Sedekah Bumi” was cancel due to pandemic.
2022년 1월 25일 오전 4:32
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My favorite festival is “Sedekah Bumi”, which is a traditional festival in Java celebrated every year. There is a lots of food. Everyone brings the food that they made and then we share our food with each other. I used to bring a basket with some different kinds of foods when I was kid. I love this festival because it reminds us to thank the earth. However, for the past two years “Sedekah Bumi” has been canceled due to pandemic.
"Food" is always singular; you can say "lots of different types of food." Instead of "every person," use "everyone." What kinds of food to people usually bring? I hope that the festival will be able to be celebrated again!
2022년 1월 25일
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