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The bar chart illustrates the change in the percentage of the options/choices which students choose after graduating in 2013 and 2018.Specifically,the proportion of finding a job decreased from 68.7% to 60.7%.In stark contrast,the percentage of applying for postgraduates increased from 26.3% to 34%.Notably,the ration of working on their own/starting up business doubled from 1.% to 2.6%.
There are two fundamental factors involved in this phenomenon.One thing,More and more undergraduates have the awareness of improving their academy degree.High level education not only can enrich their spiritual world but also can enhance their competitiveness to obtain a decent job.Thus,most students would rather choose postgraduates than take up an occupation.Second,the economy of China has developed at a rapid speed.Therefore,there are a large number of golden opportunity for undergraduate who want to work on their own.Meanwhile,compared with employed by companies,run a business by themselves can have more freedom.
From my perspective,every option you made by yourself is correct.However,if you do not have the pressure of money,it is advisable not rush into the job market.Applying for postgraduates has a lot of benefit,such as broaden your horizons,offering ample time to let you think about your deep love about your future career.No matter what choices you make,persistence and work hard is the key to success
2023년 12월 21일 오전 2:10
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The bar chart illustrates the change in the percentages of the options
which students chose after graduating in 2013 and 2018. Specifically, the
proportion finding a job decreased from 68.7% to 60.7%. In stark contrast, the
percentage who applied for postgraduate study increased from 26.3% to 34%. Notably, those who decided to work on their own/start up a business doubled from 1.% to 2.6%.
There are two fundamental factors involved in this phenomenon. For one thing, more and
more undergraduates have awareness of the benefit improving their degree. High
level education not only can enrich their spiritual world but also can enhance
their competitiveness to obtain a decent job. Thus,most students would rather
choose postgraduates than take up an occupation (this isn’t true, there were still more who got a job). Second, the economy of China has
developed at a rapid speed. Therefore, there are a large number of golden
opportunities for undergraduates who want to work on their own. (It’s still a very small percentage). Compared
with being employed by companies, running a business by themselves can let them have more freedom.
From my perspective, every option you make by yourself is correct. However, if you
do not have the pressure of money, it is advisable not rush into the job
market. Applying for a postgraduate place has a lot of benefits, such as broadening your
horizons and offering ample time to let you think about more deeply about your
future career. No matter what choices you make, persistence and hard work is the
key to success.
Good.
2023년 12월 21일
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