Noboru
Yesterday was a perfect day for me because I fully enjoyed many thins just in one day. First, I took a refreshing one-hour walk to my favorite place in my town early in the morning. Then I came back home and started to write a draft for my new book, which went fairly successfully. I was able to finish writing one chapter! Also I had as many as three language exchange meetings online, each of which I found pleasant and uplifting. I felt super happy because all of these made me appreciate my well-earned one-year research leave. I hope I will have as many days like today as I can for the rest of my leave.
2024년 6월 17일 오후 8:24
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Yesterday was a perfect day for me, because I fully enjoyed many things just in one day. First, I took a refreshing one-hour walk to my favorite place in my town, early in the morning. Then I came back home and started to write a draft for my new book, which went fairly successfully. I was able to finish writing one chapter! Also I had as many as three language exchange meetings online, each of which I found pleasant and uplifting. I felt super happy because all of these made me appreciate my well-earned one-year research leave. I hope I will have as many days like today as I can for the rest of my leave.
I would prefer "quite" or "very" or even "really" instead of "super" happy. "Supper" is very informal and doesn't quite fit the tone of the rest of this piece.
2024년 6월 17일
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