Kako
“About bird watching”
Bird watching is one of my hobbies.
In my hometown, I used to go to a park and search birds.
But recently, I haven’t do watching because I moved in this spring and was busy.
Then, today I went to the nearest park to watch birds in new town for the first time.
I watched some birds and heard their beautiful sounds.
In Japan, we can watch many kind of birds because we have four seasons. I really enjoy watching in any seasons.
2021년 5월 3일 오전 10:35
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“About bird watching” Bird watching is one of my hobbies. In my hometown, I used
to go to a park and search birds. But recently, I haven’t do watching because I
moved in this spring and was busy. Then, today I went to the nearest park to
watch birds in new town for the first time. I watched some birds and heard their
beautiful sounds. In Japan, we can watch many kind of birds because we have four
seasons. I really enjoy watching in any seasons.
.. I haven’t been watching
... in a new town
.... watching in any season
Everything else is perfect. Great English :)
2021년 5월 3일
“About bird watching”
Bird watching is one of my hobbies. In my hometown, I used to go to a park and [search] /look for birds, but recently I haven’t been doing this because I moved this spring and was busy. Then, today I went to the nearest park to watch birds in the new town for the first time. I watched /saw some birds and heard /listened to their beautiful sounds. In Japan, we can watch /see many kind of birds because we have four seasons. I really enjoy watching in any season.
The U.K. is good for birdwatching too, though it can be rather cold in the winter on a windswept moor or marsh.
2021년 5월 3일
“About bird watching” Bird watching is one of my hobbies. In my hometown, I used
to go to a park and search birds. But recently, I haven’t do watching because I
moved in this spring and was busy. Then, today I went to the nearest park to
watch birds in new town for the first time. I watched some birds and heard their
beautiful sounds. In Japan, we can watch many kind of birds because we have four
seasons. I really enjoy watching in any seasons.
Hello Kako, I am not a native English speaker but I am a fluent one! Thus, I can help you with your English. I will be learning Japanese this summer. Please message me if you are interested! ☺️
2021년 5월 4일
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