Hi people I'm from Buenos Aires a big cosmopolitan city chosen by tourists from all the world. The city has many interesting and beautiful places to visit. So, you're always welcome :) Nowadays the ma

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Hi people I'm from Buenos Aires a big cosmopolitan city chosen by tourists from all the world. The city has many interesting and beautiful places to visit. So, you're always welcome :) Nowadays the main disadvantage is that the city has many people who have been infected with the virus :( I hope we soon can enjoy this city again 🌹

2021년 2월 23일 오후 1:24

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Hi people I'm from Buenos Aires, a big cosmopolitan city chosen by tourists from all around the world. The city has many interesting and beautiful places to visit. So, you're always welcome :) Nowadays the main disadvantage is that the city has many people who have been infected with the virus :( I hope we soon can enjoy this city again 🌹

This post reads fine without my "correction", but we would usually say "all around the world". So just a suggestion.

2021년 2월 23일

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