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Yesterday, I went to dinner with a friend from high school. At the first restaurant , we talked about our memories and recent events. And at the second restaurant , I was introduced to the friend's boyfriend. I was very nervous to meet him, but he was a very nice person and made me feel at ease. I was happy to see their happy faces.
2023년 6월 23일 오후 3:57
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Yesterday, I had dinner with a friend from high school. At the first restaurant , we talked about our memories and recent events. At the second restaurant , I met my friend's boyfriend. I was very nervous to meet him, but he was a very nice person and made me feel at ease. I was happy to see their happy faces.
2023년 6월 23일
Yesterday I went to have dinner with a friend from high school. We went to two restaurants. In the first
restaurant we talked about our experiences and recent events. In the second
restaurant, I was introduced to my friend's boyfriend. I was very nervous to
meet him, but he was a very nice person and made me feel at ease. I was happy to
see their happy faces.
2023년 6월 23일
Yesterday, I had dinner with a friend from high school. We went to two different restaurants, where we reminisced about our shared memories and discussed recent events. During our meal at the second restaurant, I had the pleasure of meeting my friend's boyfriend. Initially, I felt quite nervous about the encounter, but he turned out to be a genuinely kind person who made me feel comfortable and relaxed. Witnessing the happiness on their faces filled me with joy.
The revised paragraph is grammatically correct and conveys the intended meaning clearly. The use of past tense ("went," "talked," "was introduced," "was," "made," "was happy") is appropriate for narrating events that occurred in the past. The revised paragraph maintains a consistent narrative tone throughout.
2023년 6월 23일
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