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Sayuri
Today is hot and extremely humid! I would rather stay at home than go outside. But I need to go to 1 dollar shop to buy an insulated bag. Just in case to avoid food poisoning. I usually bring rice and some fruit whenever I go to the workplace. I like to go there because cheap! Sometimes I buy unnecessary products impulsively and regret it! I learned from my past behavior. So my investment strategy is not to buy unnecessary products! I want to be a minimalist. I should choose things to minimize! In this case, I can save money.
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Today is hot and extremely humid! I would rather stay at home than go outside. But I need to go to the 1 dollar shop to buy an insulated bag. Just in case, to avoid food poisoning. I usually bring rice and some fruit whenever I go to the workplace. I like to go there because it's cheap! Sometimes I buy unnecessary products impulsively and later regret it! I learned from my past behavior. So my investment strategy is not to buy unnecessary products! I want to be a minimalist. I should choose things to minimize! In this case, I can save money.
Hi Sayuri, great to see your essay again. Your recording sounds clear to me. If you really want, you can pay more attention to the word "impulsively." But well done!
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Today is hot and extremely humid! I would rather stay at home than go outside. However, I need to go to the dollar shop to buy an insulated bag, just in case, to avoid food poisoning. I usually bring rice and some fruit with me whenever I go to work. I like going there because it's cheap! Sometimes I impulsively buy unnecessary products and end up regretting it. I have learned from my past behavior, so my investment strategy is to avoid buying unnecessary items. I strive to be a minimalist and choose things that minimize my expenses.

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