Claudia
I have traveled a lot during the summer vacation this year, and surprisingly, I enjoyed it more than I had expected. Since I have always been an introverted and indoor person, I imagined I would be exhausted if I spent so much time traveling with others. However, thanks to that I have kept taking dance lessons three to four times a week for about five months, I have become more energetic and less resistant to going out. I still feel uncomfortable if I have to stay with others for too long because I need plenty of time alone to recharge myself. So maybe I can try traveling on my own to see whether it suits me better.
2024년 8월 8일 오후 2:00
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I have traveled a lot during my summer vacation this year and, surprisingly, I enjoyed it more than I expected. Since I am an introvert and an indoor person, I had always imagined it would be exhausting to be around others so long. However, thanks to the fact that I took dance lessons three to four times a week for about five months, I have become more energetic and less resistant to going out. I still feel uncomfortable if I have to be around others for too long because introverts need plenty of time alone to recharge themselves. So maybe I should try traveling on my own to see whether it suits me better. "Introverted" is an adjective but "person" is a noun, so "introverted and indoor person" sounds unbalanced. Were you traveling with others or merely staying or visiting or dancing with others? There is a difference, and I am confused about what you mean to say. If you were traveling with others, the voice of your first and last sentences feels wrong: "WE have traveled a lot..." If not, you might use "visiting with others" or "spending time with others" rather than "traveling with others". "Staying with someone" specifically refers to sleeping in their home. It does not mean the same as "being with someone". At a dance you are "being with others" or "with others", not "staying with others".
2024년 8월 8일
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