is this well written? thanks!

My father, my brother and my two sisters were very excited for my birth. They were so happy that they did not care it was rainning just to see me in the hospital for the first time.

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is this well written? thanks!

My father, my brother and my two sisters were very excited for my birth. They were so happy that they did not care it was rainning just to see me in the hospital for the first time.

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Hi Claudia,

It could be better written as "My father, brother and two sisters were very excited for my birth, They were so happy, they didn't care that it was raining outside.They couldn't wait to see me for the first time at the hospital."

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My father, my brother, and my two sisters were very enthusiastic about my birth.

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