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At some point during the weekend, I go to the cinema to catch the latest movie but this weekend I preferred staying at home and watching an old movie. I watch a movie entitled, A scent of a woman, and it was perfectly splendid. I suppose this because Al pacino, the hero film, was so charismatic. Furthermore, he has an extraordinary ability to blend in all kinds of characters. He made us admire and pity him at the time! How amazing !
2021년 9월 25일 오후 10:10
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At some point during the weekend, I usually go to the cinema to catch the latest movie, but this weekend I preferred staying at home and watching an old one. I watched a movie called, A scent of a woman, and it was perfectly splendid. I suppose this was because Al pacino, the hero of the film, was so charismatic. Furthermore, he has an extraordinary ability to blend in all kinds of characters. He made us admire and pity him at the time! How amazing !
Cool! I like this movie too! Overall you were just missing a few connecting words, and I changed ‘entitled’ to ‘called’, as entitled is a little too formal perhaps in this case.
2021년 9월 25일
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