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hikarihikachu
help me to correct this paragraph (in romaji) please ^^ arigatou :)
Seibutsu yūki hiryō wa, shokubutsu no haiki-mono, kudamono, kachiku fun'nyō nado no yūki zairyō kara tsukura reta hiryōdesu.
Makurotomikuro eiyōso o gan'yū suru maruchi biseibutsu no tenka ni yori hakkō sa reteimasu.
Saigo ni kekka to shite hiryō wa, sokutei kanōde wanai kagaku hiryō no shiyō ni kiin suru dojō e no nyōso no renzoku shiyō ga sonshō o shūfuku suru koto ga kanōdesu.
Shokubutsunoseichō wa hijō ni hayaku, kankyō ni yasashīdesu. Sugoii deshou.
2011년 12월 29일 오후 2:30
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I am a Japanese. If I look at parts of your sentences, they are well done, yet I'm sorry to say that your essay as a whole cofused me what you want to say exactly.
If you could also write in English, you would get many answers.
2012년 1월 4일
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hikarihikachu
언어 구사 능력
중국어(광동어), 영어, 인도네시아어, 일본어, 한국어, 러시아어
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중국어(광동어), 일본어, 한국어, 러시아어
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