hi every body i have a paragraph about an EVE in iran please correct it if you see problems?
Now rooze EVE(newyear EVE)
in Now rooz EVE we can have a good time by going out and visiting our relations. As you know it is a rule in Iran to visit our relatives every two mounts, So Now rooz EVE can be a god chance for doing this diuty, Also you know in now rooz all families are waiting for some guests from diffrent places, for example if you live in zahedan, but your uncle in khash we are sure hi is waiting for you an and he tries to prepare all details for your happiness, but if we stay at home, spending our time but watching it can not be a good Now rooz EVE for you.

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hi every body i have a paragraph about an EVE in iran please correct it if you see problems?
Now rooze EVE(newyear EVE)
in Now rooz EVE we can have a good time by going out and visiting our relations. As you know it is a rule in Iran to visit our relatives every two mounts, So Now rooz EVE can be a god chance for doing this diuty, Also you know in now rooz all families are waiting for some guests from diffrent places, for example if you live in zahedan, but your uncle in khash we are sure hi is waiting for you an and he tries to prepare all details for your happiness, but if we stay at home, spending our time but watching it can not be a good Now rooz EVE for you.

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I see a few mistakes but I don't understand the ending. I hope this helps.


Nowruz Eve (New Year's Eve) 
On Nowruz Eve we can have a good time by going out and visiting our relatives. As you know it is a rule in Iran to visit our relatives every two months, so Nowruz Eve can be a good chance for doing this duty. Also you know on Nowruz all families are waiting for some guests from different places. For example if you live in Zahedan, but your uncle lives in Khash we are sure he is waiting for you and he tries to prepare all details for your happiness, but if we stay at home, spending our time but watching it can not be a good Nowruz Eve for you.