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I learnt English in Dublin where I lived for 1 year. I'm Italian and I'd improve and practice English just to not loose it. If somebody is interest
2008년 1월 2일 오전 10:29
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hey Roberta! Its really important to keep practicing and using English whenever you can, so you can not forget it, and you would be able to learn more! I will be more then happy to help you out. As for me I am trying to practise Italian, and its really really difficult! Hopefully i will be able to travel there next summer :D
2008년 1월 2일
First the "I learnt" should be "I Learned" and the second sentence should be re-written to say (I'm Italian and I practice English so I don't lose it.), and the last sentence should have the word 'of' between "is interest". The whole paragraph would read. "I learned English in Dublin, where I lived for 1 year. I'm Italian and I practice English so I don't lose it. If anyone is of interest!" I'm definitely not an expert on grammar or a teacher at that but that should help you out a little. Also it would be of interest to take note of the punctuation which I think should be abolished to just periods, question mark, and exclamation point.
2008년 1월 12일
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