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Please tell me which one makes more sense? which one is better? The sentences below are for publicity use.Please tell me which one makes more sense? which one is better? Or What would you say instead? Thank you! 1.he partnership will promote the exchange and cooperation of the Mobile Game Industry between China and Russia. Promoting the common development of the Mobile game industry in these two countries into a new high level. 2.This partnership will not only promote the exchange and cooperation about mobile game industry but also push forward the mobile game developments between China and Russia.
2013년 4월 17일 오전 3:13
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This partnership between China and Russia will help the Mobile Game Industry flourish and to pave the way for the development of the industry as well into a new height by promoting mutual exchange and cooperation.
2013년 4월 17일
I think #2 sounds better, but they BOTH make sense to me.
2013년 4월 17일
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