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Saeed Gharaati
Could you do me a favor and correct the writing below? Last week on wednesday I and myfriend went to Shiraz. The main perpose of travel was the employment test oil. But he had this test, not me. I just accompaied him. Befor and after the exam we went to many sightseeing . For example Hafezieh, Sadieh and Eram garden which was holding a TV-show there. This TV show had two special guests who they were Hamed Behdad and Ali Zia. we didn't book a room but we could find a cheap motel. Generally We had a lot of fun there and we took many photo . Our jurney didn't take more than three days and we were in kashan on saturday morning.

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Last week Wednesday, me and my friend went to Shiraz. The main purpose of the travel was the employment test oil. But he had this test, not me. I just accompanied him. Before and after the exam we went to many sightseeing. Like Hafezieh, Sadieh and Eram garden which was holding a TV-show there. This TV show had two special guests who are Hamed Behdad and Ali Zia. We didn't book a room but we could find a cheap motel. Generally We had a lot of fun there and we took many photo . Our journey didn't take more than three days and then we were in Kashan on Saturday morning.

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