can you proofread my sentence? i find it really awkward.
His calligraphy has been selected in The World Fine Arts Portfolio and he ranked No. 9 among the China modern calligraphers, which was awarded by the magzine —— Collectors in 2003.

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Sarah,

May I most respectfully suggest that your sentence needs revision.

There are at least three bits of information that we need:

1. Is "Collectors" the name of a magazine?
2, What does "which was awarded by the magazine" refer to? (What was awarded?)
3. It would make for a better sentence if you told us the name of the artist.

If you give us this information, then someone can help you write a clearer sentence.

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His calligraphy was selected in The World Fine Arts Portfolio and he hold ninth rank among the Chinese modern calligraphers, which was awarded by the magazine —— Collectors in 2003.

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没有语法问题。。。

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You are right. Try rearranging it?

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