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Can you check the below paragrphy for me? thanks a lot
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform that I lost my bag in your cinema on July 6th (last night) when I was there to see the movie of “the Adventure”.
If I remember well I was sitting on the seat of number six of the row 11. It didn’t take it with me when I left the cinema due to my carelessness. It was a black leather hand bag with a little flower logo embossed on the bottom of the right side of the bag. The brand of the bag called “MADI”. There are several things in the bag: a small red wallet with around 150$ in it, one black note book and a cosmetic bag.
I would appreciate so much if you can search the area and check out for me. You can contact me with below number if you have any news.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
With Many thanks!
2013년 5월 21일 오전 5:24
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Dear Sir,
I am writing to inform you that I lost my bag in your cinema on July 6th (last night) when I was there to watch the movie “the Adventure”. I was sitting on seat number six on row 11. In fact, I forgot it on the seat. It was a black leather hand bag with a little flower logo embossed on the bottom right side of the bag. The brand of the bag is “MADI”. There are several things in the bag: a small red wallet with around 150$ in it, one black note book and a cosmetic bag. I would appreciate so much if you can search the area and check out for me. You can contact me on the number mentioned below if you have any news. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely,
2013년 5월 21일
Dear Sir,
I am writing to inform you that I lost my bag in your cinema on July 6th (last night) when I was there to watch the movie “the Adventure”. I was sitting on seat number six on row 11. In fact, I forgot it on the seat. It was a black leather hand bag with a little flower logo embossed on the bottom right side of the bag. The brand of the bag is “MADI”. There are several things in the bag: a small red wallet with around 150$ in it, one black note book and a cosmetic bag. I would appreciate so much if you can search the area and check out for me. You can contact me on the number mentioned below if you have any news. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely,
2013년 5월 21일
Dear Sir,
I am writing to inform you that I lost my bag in your cinema on July 6th (last night) when I was there to watch the movie “the Adventure”.
I was sitting on seat number six on row 11. In fact, I forgot it on the seat. It was a black leather hand bag with a little flower logo embossed on the bottom right side of the bag. The brand of the bag is “MADI”. There are several things in the bag: a small red wallet with around 150$ in it, one black note book and a cosmetic bag.
I would appreciate so much if you can search the area and check out for me. You can contact me on the number mentioned below if you have any news.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
2013년 5월 21일
There are quite a few small errors, and improvements. It would be easier if you notebooked it.
2013년 5월 21일
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