can you correct my mistakes?
Today,at 7,00 a.m I wake up,because I Don't get Slumber, I stay there on bed thinking my dreams, my future and I feel inside so much frustration and confusion that i cried for all the morning.
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Today I woke up at 7:00 am, because I couldn't go back to sleep I laid there in bed thinking of my dreams and my future. Feeling so much frustration and confusion inside I cried the whole morning.
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Seem a machine?ahahha sorry,I had such confusion on the grammar
Then thank you very much :)
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Can you asks if the person is capable, it doe not ask for corrections. Your English reads as though it were straight from a machine translation. You woke up at seven in the morning. You didn't write when you tried to go to sleep so it is difficult to determine how many hours you tried to sleep. When you write that you reflected on your dreams, it indicates to me that you must have slept. Crying solves nothing. Frustration should make you formulate plans and workarounds. If the dreams are from your heart, work hard and remember that the journey is better than the destination.
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