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Seth
I'm writing a resume. Can anyone help me to check ou this sentence? a. Pre-sale customer service experiences in a store of tmall selling household appliances. b. Pre-sale customer service experiences in a store, selling household appliances, of tmall. Which way to say it is better? Or the other way.
2014년 4월 21일 오전 1:48
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What is tmall? Pre-sale customer service experience in a store, selling household appliances. This is OK and correct except I removed the s from experience, experiences is OK but indicates you had many different experiences instead of just stating you have experience, one type, that of customer service. . Pre-sale customer service experience in a household appliance store. This is probably a better sentence as it says the same thing but is more concise.
2014년 4월 21일
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