Would you mind answering my question please?
When my phone rang .I thought it's my teacher.I became nervous and my whole body became deadened.
Could you please correct this statement?
Your question was, "could you correct this statement?"
The answer is either Yes or No!
Try to formulate in a better way.
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Stephanie's idea of 'froze' is nice.
Another word you could use instead of 'deadened' is 'numb'.
...my whole body went numb.'
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When my phone rang .I thought it's my teacher.I became nervous and my whole body became deadened.
"When the phone rang, I thought it was my teacher. I became nervous and froze."
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When my phone rang, I thought it was my teacher and I became nervous and my whole body was shaking with cold.