della
which sentence is better? or can someone revise the sentence for me. Thanks~ our company produce flange plates of different standards required by different countries and non-standard ones. our company produce flange plates meeting different standards required by different countries and non-standard ones.
2014년 8월 28일 오전 2:19
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I understand both but think they both sound a little awkward. I would word it more like this: "Our company produces both non-standard flange plates and those that meet the various standards required by different countries.
2014년 8월 28일
the second sentence is undoubtedly better. Try to use certain words once in a sentence such as different. it has many synonyms and will show that you have a broad vocabulary. also.. i think it would be "Our company produces" unless you were talking about farm produce which is just vegetables or fruit
2014년 8월 28일
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