Hello
Hello,
I am just a arrived in my house after a long afternoon.
I had walked around turin's center and i saw a lot of people.
Now I would like to watch a film.
Byeeeee

Question

Hello
Hello, 
I am just a arrived in my house after a long afternoon.
I had walked around turin's center and i saw a lot of people.
Now I would like to watch a film.
Byeeeee

Answer

Hello,

I just arrived at my house after a long afternoon.
I walked around Turin's center and I saw a lot of people.
Now I would like to watch a film.
Bye!

(This type of thing would be better in the notebook section).

Answer

Hello.
This is the question page. You can use the notebook section so that people can correct your entries. Good luck! (:

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