Paragraph Health Of Mind Entrance to our children's mind to make sure of its health is impossible. If think of other side ot the matter, we will can male that minds, but from the extenal. There are things have a power on child's mentality such as the school, home and televisin. that was a introduce to an essay , I want to corrected it from all sides ( grammar, sentence structure, paragrahp structure . . . etc ) and I want some sentence to put it in this paragraph Thanx.