Smelval
FOUR SENTENCES Can you explain my mistakes thanks for help However, some people argue that life consists of more important things than health. They are sure that a lot of money, fame and a successful career may provide a happy life even if you are sick. I consider that health is the key to happy life. the consuequences of any serious diseases can affect on your futire
2015년 4월 25일 오후 1:48
답변 · 1
Two fixes: "...the key to a happy life." "...can affect your future." (You confused "affect" with another word. Also, check the spelling for consequence.)
2015년 4월 25일
아직도 답을 찾지 못하셨나요?
질문을 남겨보세요. 원어민이 도움을 줄 수 있을 거예요!