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is my English correct? The Lord is my teacher, He makes me stay awake in my studies all night; He leads me from page to page. He restores my sanity; He guides me in the path of conciousness, for my GRADES sake... even though I grow weary in the shadow of books,projects,assignments, activities,etc. I fear no deadline for submission/ test. for Thou art with me. Thy rod and Thy staff they keep jabbing me.... Thou wilt prepare a test for me in the presence of my classmates... THou hast crammed my mind with so much knowledge; my eyelids droop. Surely a good grade and a kind teacher will follow me after the test, or I will dwell in the class forever!
2008년 9월 5일 오전 8:36
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Yes it is correct & is based on the sacred hymn 'The Lord is my shepherd' which is usually sung at a funeral service.
2008년 9월 6일
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yes, your english is very good, and i really like this poem
2008년 9월 5일
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It is excellent.
2008년 9월 5일
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That is pretty cool! I like it. It is creative. ^_^
2008년 9월 5일
Yes. Your English is fine.
2008년 9월 5일
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