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Adriana C
Can you help me correcting this paragraph?
As i'm studying law, I think cooperation it's a great complement to my studies. Also, I consider this topic should be important for everyone, because is a way to understand international relations, how our world is currently working and what is happening around it, besides find solutions to actual problems and models to establish best relations between culturally different countries.
2015년 8월 11일 오후 7:50
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I may have changed it a bit much but this is how I would structure the paragraph:
As a law student, I find cooperating with others to be a great complement to my legal studies. I consider the issue of interpersonal cooperation to be an important factor in understanding how international relations function. Finding solutions to actual problems and establishing models of improving relations between culturally different countries relies heavily on cooperation among all parties involved.
Good luck! Jim Reiter
2015년 8월 11일
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