give your thoughts on this poem I wrote

The sky was shaking.........
with my sight focused on the ground
insecurity was reigning (or raining)

I lifted up my eyes,
and reality was found
just a small puddle in my life

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give your thoughts on this poem I wrote

The sky was shaking.........
with my sight focused on the ground
insecurity was reigning (or raining)
 
I lifted up my eyes,
and reality was found 
just a small puddle in my life

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Great.

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good theme，
if   the order of some words changed， then how ...

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Good! write some more.. But this time include the word darkness.. Or sorrow.. Thanks