hi,there i just write (it's better to use wrote here) a couple of words in my mind (??? this is vague), kind of writing practising (kinda like a writing exercise), and i'd like u to pick (out) some (use "the" here) incorrect expressions, no matter (be it) grammar/verbal matching mistakes,or (phrases in) chinese thinking style which seems not that (doesn't seem to be) appropriate in english, (new sentence)anything (that) makes u feel uncomfortable is acceptable!!!! do be strict and picky!!!! thx a LOT~~~~~~~~~~XD