included/ played/catching
I have to write about a movie .
Do the following make sense?
This film has been adapted on 14 occassions, eight if them- this included-have been made by BBC

The new version played by David Thewlis, Ken ...and..
Theplot will catch us while we know the tragedy

The figure of the inspector rises our curiosity

Thank you very much

Question

included/ played/catching
I have to write about a movie .
Do the following make sense?
This film has been adapted on 14 occassions, eight if them- this included-have been made by BBC

The new version played by David Thewlis, Ken ...and..
Theplot will catch us while we know the tragedy

The figure of the inspector rises our curiosity

Thank you very much

Answer

This film has been adapted 14 times, eight of the adaptations have been made by BBC

The latest version is played by David Thewlis, Ken ...and..
The story might surprise us, although we know the plot.
The inspector is intriguing to us.

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You made some mistakes:
*Does the following make sense?
This film has been adapted 14 times.Eight *of them, this *one included, have been made by *the BBC.

The new version *stars David Thewlis, Ken ...and..
The plot will *keep  our attention even though we *already know the tragic outcome.

The figure of the inspector *peaks our curiosity

Thank you very much