Grammar mistake?" With long hair and preference of black colour dress style, she looked mysterious."
Please advise if there is any grammar mistake in this sentence "With long hair and preference of black colour dress style, she looked mysterious."

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Grammar mistake?" With long hair and preference of black colour dress style, she looked mysterious."
Please advise if there is any grammar mistake in this sentence "With long hair and preference of black colour dress style, she looked mysterious."

Thank you very much!

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...'and preference of black colour dress style...' makes little sense. It sounds like Chinglish. Chris' suggestion is as good as any in terms of writing it correctly.

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More naturally in English we would say "with her long hair and stylish black dress, she looked mysterious." Based on the little context given

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"With her long hair and (her) preference for black dresses in any style, she always looked mysterious."