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Is there any grammar mistake Guests invited every year can help investors gauge the investment dynamic, clear investment context, and continue to increase their value of wealth. There are some Masters Forums and finance lectures held during the exhibition, investors show their great interest in attending the forums to learn the market trend and financing capability.
2015년 11월 30일 오전 3:53
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Also Master's should have an apostrophe. The 2nd sentence is not punctuated correctly. Put either a period (.) or a semi-colon (;) after "exhibition". "Trend" should probably be plural, "trends", because there is usually more than one trend going on at a time.
2015년 11월 30일
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It's a bit technical, although I'm assuming that's due to the target audience you're aiming for. One issue is in this bit "and continue to increase their value of wealth." I think it's ok grammatically, but it doesn't sound natural. A better way to put it would be something like "and continue to learn ways to increase their wealth".
2015년 11월 30일
Guest speakers, invited every year, give helpful advise to investors on how they can gauge the investment climate and make clear investment choices with a view to increasing their overall net wealth. During the exhibition, there are some forums and finance lectures held specifically for advanced investors, who show their great interest by turning up in numbers so as to learn more about market trends and the financial options available.
2015년 11월 30일
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