Ruslan
Confrontations containing the seeds of unrequited hostility can serve the creation of sth. ?? Sibling confrontations containing the seeds of unrequited hostility can serve the creation of familial difficulties lasting for years. Can you help me to find and expalin the wrong words in the sentence? Thanks in advance
2016년 2월 14일 오후 1:41
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The only thing that I would change is to add the commas in the appropriate places and replace " the creation of familial difficulties" with "to create family difficulties."
2016년 2월 15일
Sibling confrontations arising from their deep -rooted hostilities against one another can create familial dificulties that can last for years. unrequited > not returned/one -sided as in unrequited love> not the correct choice of word From their relentless hostility against ../from theirmutual hatred for one another/from their mutual and reciprocal hostilities against ..> All ok. From the seeds of their mutual and deep-rooted hostility , confrontations between siblings can arise to cause familial difficuties that last for years
2016년 2월 14일
You try: "Sibling confrontations contain the seeds of unrequited hostility that can create familial difficulties lasting for years" Or perhaps more simply: "Unresolved sibling hostility can lead to family difficulties that last for years"
2016년 2월 14일
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