How to translate those sentences below
question 1..那些东西都是她在旅途中精挑细选带回家来的，她珍藏了一辈子
Those things was carefully chosen during the journey,then was brought to home.
But how to translate it without the comma

question 2 我在“利益”下方写上“收回舞厅的使用权”

I wrote "take back the use right of the dance hall" under the "profit"
but it sounds weird ,isn't it?
who can tell me how to translate these two sentences in English?

Question

How to translate those sentences below
question 1..那些东西都是她在旅途中精挑细选带回家来的，她珍藏了一辈子
Those things was carefully chosen during the journey,then was brought to home.
But how to translate it without the comma

question 2 我在“利益”下方写上“收回舞厅的使用权”

I wrote "take back the use right of the dance hall" under the "profit"
but it sounds weird ,isn't it? 
who can tell me how to translate these two sentences in English?

Answer

Hi, 
1. 那些东西都是她在旅途中精挑细选带回家来的，她珍藏了一辈子
I assumed that you wanted to translate the first half of this Chinese sentence into an English one without a comma. If so, I'd translate it as following, "Those were the things that she carefully selected in the trip and brought home."

2. 我在“利益”下方写上“收回舞厅的使用权”
I'd probably translate the second sentence this way, "Underneath the word 'profit', I wrote, 'Revoking the right to use the dance hall.'"

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