Please correct ...tks
Good afternoon teachers.My name is Dora,an outgoing girl. It is really my honor to have this opportunity for an interview.( Now I will introduce myself briefly.)
I have a lot of hobbies,such as photography,zither and flute . Usually, I like reading books and listening to the music, because they can cultivate my mind.
Also , I like traveling with my parents and grandparents, they are wise and open-minded. I love them.They tell me,Time has wings,never put off till tomorrow what can be done today. So, it is important for me to manage the time.
That’s all. Thank you for giving me the chance.

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Please correct ...tks
Good afternoon teachers.My name is Dora,an outgoing girl. It is really my honor to have this opportunity for an interview.( Now I will introduce myself briefly.)
      I have a lot of hobbies,such as photography,zither and flute . Usually, I like reading books and listening to the music, because they can cultivate my mind.
      Also , I like traveling with my parents and grandparents, they are wise and open-minded. I love them.They tell me,Time has wings,never put off till tomorrow what can be done today. So, it is important for me to manage the time.
        That’s all. Thank you for giving me the chance.

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Good afternoon, teachers.
My name is Dora and I am an outgoing girl. It is an honor to have this opportunity to come for this interview. Now I will introduce myself briefly.
I have a lot of hobbies,such as photography,zither and flute . Somtetimes, I like to read books and listen to music . That is because they can cultivate my mind.
Also , I like to travel with my parents and grandparents,and  they are wise and open-minded. I love them.They often tell me, "Time has wings and to never put something off till tomorrow when it can be done today". So, it is important for me to manage time.
That’s all. Thank you for your correction .

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