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someone please correct my paragraph, thanks in advance.
There is no doubt that the traditional dress is one of the necessary ingredients to build a civilization, which became nowadays too essential for its development. and noone deny that the traditional dress defines Nations and gives an excellent unique symbol , and shows the degree of consciousness and the diversity of successful civilizations. For example The "kaftan" is one of the oldest traditional Moroccan clothing, which first recognised in Marini age and has spread in Andalusia, according to some researchers, due to the music of "Ziryab" at the beginning of the nineteenth century, who was wearing this uniform, when he moved to Andalusia.
2016년 5월 10일 오후 11:17
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There were only a few minor errors.
"There is no doubt that the traditional dress is one of the necessary ingredients to build a civilization; nowadays it has become essential for its development. Nobody denies that the traditional dress defines nations, gives an excellent unique symbol, and shows the degree of consciousness and the diversity of successful civilizations. For example, the "kaftan" is one of the oldest pieces of traditional Moroccan clothing, which was first recognised in the Marini age and has spread in Andalusia, according to some researchers, due to the music of "Ziryab" at the beginning of the nineteenth century (he was wearing this uniform, when he moved to Andalusia)."
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