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Marginalised through bullying that they received .does it sound ok? The full sentence This contributes to the marginalization of students through the bullying that they received regarding with their non- branded clothing. Thanks
2016년 11월 9일 오후 11:05
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"through bullying that they received" sounds a bit weird, because bullying is not so much something you receive as it is something that is done to you. And also you can't have "regarding with," it is just "regarding." (received regarding their non- branded clothing) Perhaps "This contributes to the marginalization of students who were bullied due to their non- branded clothing" sounds better.
2016년 11월 9일
I would say: This contributes to the marginalization of students by the bullying they received because of their non- branded clothing.
2016년 11월 9일
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