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Which one should I use?
Is it okay if I said:
- Because of globalization, it has become easier for people from undeveloped and developing countries to acquire better education..
OR
do I have to say :
- With the increase in globalization, it has become easier for people from undeveloped and developing countries to acquire better education..
2016년 11월 20일 오후 5:40
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Both versions are absolutely fine.
2016년 11월 20일
Use the latter since you intend to show the correlation of globalization and the increase access to better education. The first one gives the impression that globalization is a fixed state; it is not,
2016년 11월 20일
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