Tom Richard
Hello! I'm a English learner. Could you please help me correct the errors in this article? Thanks! I always remember the act of kindness a policeman shows me when I was about 8 years old in 1969. I used to wet the bed frequent as a child. Depending on how angry my mum was, I often would be sent to school with breakfast or bath as a punishment. On the way school I'd often meet with this policemen from Bankstown. He would ask me, "Have you had the breakfast today?" When "no" would be his answer, he'd give me a hotdog. What I loved that hotdog! I happily walked off to school to drink some milk but water. I'm now 55 but I still haven't forgot it.
2016년 12월 6일 오후 2:39
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Thanks for your advice. I have posted this article in notebook.
2016년 12월 6일
Hello Tom, this would be better posted in notebook as it is easier to correct. Best wishes. Bob
2016년 12월 6일
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