It's a fast and convenience approach to connect with people.
Hi there, Could you please review this to see if it makes sense?

1. I usually write by email because it's a fast and convenience approach to connect with people.

2. But, If it's time for an important event, or for an elderly people to show my appreciation, I think handwriting in person is a better way.

3. According to my occupation, I usually write with a computer.

4. Sometimes I write stories or diaries. It's been a long time that I haven't made new poems.

5. Almost every day I listen to music, it brings me a vital and relaxing feeling in the night.

Thank you so much for your kindness!

Question

It's a fast and convenience approach to connect with people.
Hi there, Could you please review this to see if it makes sense?

1. I usually write by email because it's a fast and convenience approach to connect with people.

2. But, If it's time for an important event, or for an elderly people to show my appreciation,  I think handwriting in person is a better way.

3. According to my occupation, I usually write with a computer.

4. Sometimes I write stories or diaries.  It's been a long time that I haven't made new poems.

5. Almost every day I listen to music, it brings me a vital and relaxing feeling in the night.

Thank you so much for your kindness!

Answer

1. I usually write emails because it's a fast and convenience approach to connect with people.

2. However, when it comes to an important event, or to show my appreciation for the elderly , I think handwriting a letter is a better way.

3. According to my occupation, I usually write with a computer.

4. Sometimes I write stories or diary entries but it has been a long time since I wrote any new poems.

5. Almost daily I listen to music, it relaxes me and gives me a feeling of vitality at night."

I hope this helps

Casey

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For number 5, it's more natural to put 'almost every day' after the verb and complement. "I listen to music almost every day,..."

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Hi Bramwell, Many thanks for your caring.  
1. ya, you're right, "convenient" approach.
2. May I say this sentence below?
According to my occupation is related the field of computer, so I usually write with a computer.

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3. In my job ( or work)...'According to' does not really make any sense here.

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Convenient, not convenience. Convenient is the adjective, convenience is a noun.

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