Niwantha
Appreciate if someone could suggest a better sentence to convey the idea.
Hi friends,
I am not happy about the word order of the following sentence of mine. Appreciate if someone could suggest a better sentence or word order to convey the same idea.
" As requested, I am sending this message to remind you to go through the notes of yours prior to our tomorrow's class."
Thanks in advance.
Niwantha
2017년 4월 26일 오전 9:27
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I would say the following:
"As requested, I am sending this message to remind you to go through your notes prior to our class tomorrow."
Note: "your notes" and "our class" are accurate and simpler ways to say what you want to say.
If you were to go with the answer above, I would change it to "I am conveying a message from (person) to please go through the notes before the class tomorrow." (No need for 'on tomorrow')
2017년 4월 26일
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"(As requested, )I am here to convey a message (from WHO) : Please go through the notes before the class on tomorrow."
* ( ) = optional
2017년 4월 26일
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