this is what a letter asking for help in taking the course would look like: To Whom it May Concern: I am interested in taking your IELTS online course and am writing you to see if you offer any financial aid or scholarships to do so. I’m an electrical engineer with a degree from Anadolu University in Turkey. I escaped via boat from Turkey because of political pressure and came to London. I have applied for asylum and am awaiting a response from the Home Office. I want to learn academic English. I'm an IT expert and if I improve my English, I believe I can quickly find work in London. Right now, my English is not good enough. (An English speaker is helping me write this letter). I think my English level is 5 points on the IELTS. I can write this letter, but my spoken English is poor. At this time, I don’t have the funds to pay for the course, because I spent all my money to come to Great Britain. I am wondering if you have any scholarships to help people in my situation to take this IELTS online course. If you do, I would be grateful if you sent me information on how I can apply for one. Thank you for your time and consideration. Sincerely, (your name)

Is this a letter that you wish to send to someone? Do you want someone to correct it> Please move this to the Notebook section of Italki. It will be easier for someone to correct in that section (this section is for shorts answers)