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What's the meaning of this sentence? Are some words redundence? The field of health geography is often overlooked, but it constitutes a huge area of need in the fields of geography and healthcare.
2018년 6월 20일 오후 11:57
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I think it sounds a bit redundant, but it's not incorrect at all. Something like "The field of health geography is often overlooked, but it constitutes a huge area of need in the two fields it entails." or "The field of health geography is often overlooked, but it constitutes a huge area of need in healthcare around the world." might be more concise.
2018년 6월 21일
To my ears, it doesn't sound redundant. It expands on the meaning of health geography.
2018년 6월 21일
Thank you.
2018년 6월 21일
I like to use " although " instead of " but " .. You can also say " huge area of need for both geography and healthcare.
2018년 6월 21일
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