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1.The victory day is celebrated in russia on the ninth of may . Voctory day is a very important holiday for Russia people because is hour the memory of people who died in the great Patronik wear . 2. People spand a lot of time on preparations for the Victory day . For example , they day George ribbons , wtach same fulms about the great Patronik war , they print some photos of relatives who died in this war for the prosession on the ninth of may . 3. In the morning people go to the central squear , to watch parades and congratulate veterans , and same people lay flowers on the graves of deat solders . Also there is a prossion which is called " immortal regoment " . . People walk on the streets with photos of thein dead relatives . Throughout the day one celebrations , and in the evening people watch firework show . 4. It is very important to celebrate Victory day because we must remember the feat of our acestors . People are prond of our contry on this holiday.
2018년 9월 23일 오전 8:02
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1. Victory Day is celebrated in Russia on the 9th of May. Victory Day is a very important holiday for Russian people because it honours the memory of people who died in the great patriotic war.
2. People spend a lot of time on preparations for Victory Day. For example, they display George ribbons, watch films about the war, and print photos of relatives who died in the war for use in the procession on the 9th of May.
3. In the morning, people go to the central square, to watch parades and congratulate veterans. Some people lay flowers on the graves of dead soldiers. Also, there is a procession which is called the ‘immortal regiment’ when people walk the streets carrying photographs of their dead relatives. The celebrations continue throughout the day, and in the evening people watch firework shows.
4. It is very important to celebrate Victory Day because we must remember the feats of our ancestors. People are proud of our country on this holiday.
2018년 9월 23일
May, Victory, for the Russian people, spend, some films, procession, square, some people, dead soldiers, " Immortal Regiment " , their, celebration, ancestors, proud, country.
2018년 9월 23일
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